Her – 1999
Posted by NyalicSep 3
This is the first writing i had ever done. I had an assignment for an english class to write a “poem” and decided to take it seriously. I was a freshman and young so the writing might be a little corny but im sure each of us has felt this at some point in their life and nothing is a joke if you appreciate the feelings of another person. Hope you like….
Her – 1999
When i first saw her it felt as if i were struck by lightening. From that point on i strived to become the person she wanted to be around. On days I’ve sen her talking to her friends and wished i were that person i seen her talk to. I seen her listen…. i seen her laugh.
She changed what i do, she changed what i say, she changed my life. For that I’ve seen what I’ve done with my life and laugh. She changed my life to what i wish it to be. She seems to be good to be true.
When she talks to me, even for a minute my whole days turns to be good. if only she knew who i am inside for that i know we would be friends for life. Isn’t that why we were put on this Earth? to love and be loved?
You could say it was a goal to have a person like her. I will keep trying and trying until my goal is reached in its best was possible. my love for her is like the endless stars in the sky.
Ben Kiesov
to ASHTOM
4 comments
Comment by Charles on September 4, 2008 at 3:32 PM
I remember this one. You let me read it many years ago for the first time. It reminds me of the first couple I wrote. It reminds me of Branson. I still remember the girl’s name that this was written to and how the name ASHTOM was created. Great stuff, man. I’ll have to try to find my own here soon.
Comment by Charles on September 4, 2008 at 3:43 PM
Additionally, I changed this post and a couple of the previous (Cursed Land 1 and 2) to display in the “Writings” category. A couple of them were set to display also in the “General” category. I removed that as I assume you did that on accident. Let me know if I am mistaken.
Comment by Dhruv Tucker on November 10, 2008 at 12:53 AM
Hey Ben and Charles. I don’t know if you remember me (you ought to), we went to high school together. I Googled your name, Ben, and after finding this site I decided to send you a line. How have you been? Send me an email, I’d be happy to hear from you.
- Dhruv
I’m that tall guy you used to hang around with, if you’re still unsure.
Comment by Charles on November 12, 2008 at 3:07 PM
Dhruv! We definitely do remember you. How have you been? It’s been, what?, seventy-five years since we’ve spoken last? Ben doesn’t have a computer and/or internet just yet, so he may not catch this message for a while, but I will let him know you’ve commented here. It’s cool that you’ve found this website. We’ll have to keep in touch. Also, if you would like to be an “author” here at Vast Reality, let myself or Jerod know. Take a look around and let us know what you think. Good to hear from you, man.